Here is my second rough cut of myself and the group's promotional video,
this rough cut is to show Simon this afternoon and get his feedback.
This rough cut is after the Bournemouth feedback from Masters editing
students at Bournemouth, who said that the main two points were structure
and pace which we needed to add. We will show this to Simon and get his
feedback this afternoon.
I have also started to act on the feedback shown by this rough cut,
and have started to make a few changes on the video, If you compare
this video to the first rough cut you can see a few shot changes aswell
as some shots faster paced and more of a story to this rough cut.
Hopefully with Simon's feedback too I should be on the way to editing
to the best of my ability based on the feedback.

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